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You and I
Two seperate sides
You and I
Completely different lives
You and I
How we complain
You and I
The song stayed the same

We cut ourselves past selling short of what we thought we knew we were, we were right.
Conversations compulsive in concieving contradictions
Retract the moment and see yourself more tactful tasteful
What was it we feared so well?
I was bought up from the soul and I couldn't sell

You and me
We are being rediculous
Seeing as how we've come so far it was just lust
You and me
Are sprawling down a road too fast on a path too short
Now we don't know who we are

We just didn't know.
:iconcavepersonman:

Author's Comments

I know, I know... I'm sacrificing syntax and grammar for good lyrics that make sense and flow well with a certain rythym. Shush. :D I was thinking about so many different things at the time and my words just spat out at me, so I wrote them down as they barrelled along. I think the result was an angsty poem/song that definitely is a keeper.

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:iconsun-eyed-girl:
I like this a lot. Good work :)
:iconcavepersonman:
Thank you :bow:

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If I had to sum up myself in just a few short words, I wouldn't do justice with the words to be spoken. Action has to be taken in order to understand my reasoning.
:iconseasicksailor:
I relate heavily to this buddy, good job. :)
:iconcavepersonman:
Thanks. :D

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If I had to sum up myself in just a few short words, I wouldn't do justice with the words to be spoken. Action has to be taken in order to understand my reasoning.
:iconowel:
wow this is great :clap:

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:iconcavepersonman:
Thank you so much! :heart:

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If I had to sum up myself in just a few short words, I wouldn't do justice with the words to be spoken. Action has to be taken in order to understand my reasoning.

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